How good would this black/ red magic the gathering deck do in a tournament?

i'm new myself but what i see is you have too many cards, and too many one-ofs. a standard deck has 60 cards, filled with awesome cards. oh and the minimum amount of cards in a deck is 60. you want to not have many one-ofs because your chances of drawing that card are slim, especially in a 60 card deck. you also have to find out what you want your deck to do, and find the best cards you can that help achieve what you want, and get up to 4 of those cards a piece to increase the chance to get them, and get them often.